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Build your key message hierarchy

April 9th, 2012 · Copywriting, Strategy

When you get a chance to talk to a prospect — you want to make sure you talk to them about what matters.  And if you’re not well prepared…that usually doesn’t happen.

Think back to when you were a teenager (or a pre-teen if you developed early) and were figuring out how to talk to that boy or girl you had a crush on.

Remember how your brain just fuzzed over when you got the chance and the next thing you knew, you were babbling something about how your cat was stuck in a tree, your grandma had a mustache and you didn’t like pears?

The same phenomenon occurs when we begin to talk to someone new at a networking event or a prospect who just called/walked in the door.

Without a plan, we babble.

The solution is an easy one.  At McLellan Marketing Group, we call it your message hierarchy.  Here’s fair warning — when I tell you how to do it, it is going to appear to be quite simple.  You might even think “seriously Drew, that’s all you got?”

But I assure you, it’s harder than it looks.  And it deserves some time and attention.

Assume you’re at a networking event, and someone you’ve never met before approaches you.  They extend their hand and say — “Hi, I’m Bob.  Nice to meet you.  Tell me what you do for a living.” (I know…no one sounds like that but play along)

Answer these questions in this order.

  1. If you could only tell Bob ONE thing about your business (a single sentence) that you hope he’ll remember forever and repeat often. What would you say?
  2. If you discovered you had time for a second sentence, what would you add?
  3. For some reason – you get a chance at adding a third sentence.  What’s next.
  4. Wow…Bob seems fascinated.  Add another sentence about your business.
  5. You’re on a roll!  Bob hasn’t said a word…he’s so mesmerized.  Add another sentence, quick.

You get the idea.  It’s the first question that’s the killer.  If you could only say ONE thing…and then had to walk away and that was all Bob was ever going to remember about your business — what would you say?

But once you figure that out — that’s golden.  Now you know the key message you should always lead with.  It doesn’t have to be the exact same sentence every time, but the message should be the same.

When you look at the answers to those 5 questions — you’ve build your message hierarchy.  Think of it as a triangle, widening with every sentence.  The most important point is at the top and then you add a layer underneath, over and over again.

Please give it a try.  It’s tougher than it looks but it will help you stay on target no matter what marketing tool you’re creating.

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Brilliant writing is timeless

September 7th, 2011 · Copywriting

Two months into launching my blog in 2006, I stumbled upon this example of copywriting brilliance and shared it with my readers.  Back then, my readers consisted of my parents and about 2 other kind souls who took pity on the newbie blogger.

I was going through some old posts for a project I’m working on and discovered it again.  Now that I have a whole handful of readers, I thought I’d share it again.

As you experience the copy, think about how it must have evolved.  The time it took.  The precision of the language.  This kind of work doesn’t happen when you’re rushed or not really thinking about the end game — what do I want my audience to feel/realize at the end?

There’s a twist to this…so stick with it until the end.  It’s worth it.

Enjoy.

 

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Taglines that stick

May 5th, 2011 · Branding, Copywriting, Passion · 3 Comments

  I think most taglines used by businesses today are a cop out.  They feel good but promise nothing. A reader wrote and asked if I’d talk about the other side of the coin – what makes a tagline great? Creating and using a strong tagline takes real courage.  A tagline that will last for [Read more...]

What if you just talked like a real human being?

November 26th, 2010 · Copywriting, Sales · 16 Comments

I began my career as a copywriter and at the core, it's still how I think of myself.  I love creating emotional responses, telling stories and drawing pictures with words.  (This could be due to the fact that I cannot draw them any other way!) But I've always believed that many marketing writers have missed [Read more...]

Marketing tip #96: Be specific

September 15th, 2010 · Copywriting · 20 Comments

One of the most frustrating "worries" that marketing types sometimes express is that they want to use weasel words in their marketing.  Words like "nearly," "over" or "almost all." Typically, they're worried about someone calling them on the details so they want to hedge their bet. Look at these two sentences: We've served nearly 1,000 [Read more...]

Marketing tip #26: Be brave enough not to tell the whole story

September 13th, 2010 · Copywriting · 18 Comments

When you are creating content — be it marketing copy for a brochure, an e-book, a radio script or even leaving a sales call voicemail — you need to know when to shut up.  We're so eager to tell the customers/prospects all about our widget, service or knowledge — we try to cram it all [Read more...]

Copywriting tip #91: Can you say it a different way?

June 28th, 2010 · Copywriting, Marketing · 8 Comments

One of the maxims of marketing is repetition.  Maybe that's why most ad copy sounds the same.  Everyone seems to take the same spin on the product or service…and end up sounding a bit "me too" when all is said and done. Take the idea of encouraging seat belt usage.  For years we've seen the [Read more...]

My language is just grating!

January 15th, 2010 · Copywriting, Innovation & Creativity, Marketing · 10 Comments

I've noticed something that's been quite prevalent in my writing of late.  The word "great."  Apparently I think just about everything is great.  Lazy is what that's all about. Lazy writing is boring writing.  It's not juicy.  My words aren't caressing a darn thing. Lazy is not memorable, quotable or even mildly noteworthy.  No matter [Read more...]

Turn your sales letters into workhorses!

November 12th, 2009 · Copywriting · 29 Comments

Neil Sawers, a 25+ year corporate writing veteran can show you how.  In his new book, How to Write Proposals, Sales Letters and Reports, he spells it out in easy to understand, follow and learn examples and guidelines. But don't take my word for it.  Listen to what the Midwest Book Review (one of the [Read more...]

Hype is so 1990s

September 8th, 2009 · Copywriting · 16 Comments

One of the marketing trends that has been emerging for the past several years is the idea of authenticity.  Consumers want to have real conversations, not be “sold” by over zealous ad copy.  The over the top style of copy triggers today’s consumers to be on guard.  They feel manipulated, which, as you might imagine, [Read more...]